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for Fractured

by tdg

person Amanda
schedule September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just found and read Fractured for the first time and was blown away. After getting over the shock of the baby notng Hng Heero\'s, I really felt sympathy for Relena. Even felt sorry for Heero for almost missing his chance. Loved that it was naughty Trowa who did the deed. I\'m crazy about Trowa and Relena romances, even though this doesn\'t actually count
as one. Wonderful story all around. My complimens.
schedule September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I thought that was a kick ass story!!!!
person Juri
schedule September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Perfect ending! I enjoyed this so much I need to read it again.
person Misao Soup
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHH! This was the perfect ending, even though Relena losing her baby was sad. Heero and Relena are made for each other anu shu showed it well.
person Excel
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So sad! But I agree with you. Heero and Trowa would never have been to get along if Relena had had the baby. Still, I felt slightly weepy for her. I don\'t want this story to END!!!
person Shampoo
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! What else are you gonna do to the poor girl? Feel sad for the girl. Especially about the baby. Still, good stuff.
person wren_legacy
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy! *sheepish grin* I like this story alot and can\'t wait for you to continue it. The rest of the groups gonna know somethings up as soon as they see the mess that Trowa is. I just can\'t wait for more! I like all of your stories, but this one has the reader standing on pins and needles. Well, til I read again! Ja!
person gundamgal
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow!
NOW that\'s a twist. I thought it was Duo, then it was Trowa. You\'re a very good writer w/ a very broad creativity. Hope you\'ll post the next chap as soon as possible. Good luck and God bless.
person Juri
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Trowa\'s a dead man! Heero IS gonna bury him in Relena\'s garden. Awesome surprise.
person Misao Soup
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I kind of figured it was him. If Heero doesn\'t murder him I WILL be surprised. Love this crazy love triangle.

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