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for unrequited

by HappilyJaded

person Angel of Mirth
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good god. Relena is a fucking whore. Heero isn\'t even cold yet. *fumes* Well let\'s see what happens in your epilogue...
person Angel of Mirth
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well Relena of course didn\'t deserve shit in this fic. I don\'t care if she passed out during 10 conferences. In fact I hate them all..ARGH...forget it..Good job =_= though I wish they\'d all just had shot each other. *slinks off to hopefully find a good Noin/Milliardo fic and feel better*
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent story, although I was sad that Heero had to die. I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the great work; you\'re an outstanding writer!!

~Halogazer
person Evil Dr. Muraki
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a really wonderful ending but a tad bit sad with Relena finally wisen up and found love, Trowa on the otherhand seem to have gotten stuck in the past. Maybe it\'s retribution for all the things he did.
person juni
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god Jaded! You shock me so, but its so sad... and yet I still love it!! Kudos to you for making this boring day better!!!
person WOW
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Though I was hoping for a 1xRx3 resolution here, but what you did, did make sense as well, plus I\'d rather have Heero dead than continue to live and be forced to watch Relena and Trowa be together.

I\'m not expecting a happy epilogue to this, though I can hope for one, a happy 3xR future.
person Evil Dr. Muraki
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I thought you\'d never update and forgot all about your readers.^_~ But it\'s always worth the wait so it\'s okay I guess,^_^ I like the way you kept it somewhat vague but dropped hints as to who was being buried. You kept me guessing who shot who and who died. And all the time I was thinking Nooooo! Did she kill who I think she killed?^_^;;; Somehow it\'s sad that one had to die but methinks you did the right thing. It\'s so easy to play safe and trap them into a threesome but you made a choice and I like what you did.^_^ Now, I know it\'s not going to be all roses and we\'ll know that in the epilogue. I\'m sure there\'s going to be a catch in the end.^_~ Oh and yeah...let me not forget to mention the lemon scene. Though ns des detailed and long like in your previous chapters...it\'s still HOT!^_^ Good luck on the epilogue. I\'ll be waiting for it.^_^ You really did a great job on this one...well, you always do.^_^
person Silvermoonlight
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God that was heart wrenching in places, some of the emotions Relena felt where so realistic. It was also touching to see everyone coming to her aid as hell as Hero.
This is a truly great story please continue
person eeek
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, what a way to leave us in suspense. Sorry this review is late in coming, I didn\'t know it had been updated. I\'m a little scared now, because I have a sinking feeling that Relena was the one that got shot.

Oh god, please let Relena have a happy ending and find love out of all of this craziness. From what it sounds like, Trowa did start out using Relena, but then has come to care for her and enjoy her on some level and I think Heero feels for her too, because even though he rejected her at first, sometimes it takes losing something before you realize how much it meant to you.

So what am I saying? I\'m all up for the three of them coming to a nice, happy medium and deciding to all become lovers, though that more then likely won\'t happen, that\'s what I\'m hoping for. Why should just one of them win when all three of them could be winners. I\'m a 1xR and a 3xR lover, so I\'d hate for either of them to get hurt, or Relena.
person Evil Dr. Muraki
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love and lust are two different things indeed. Amen to Relena for that. How could Heero assume and say he loves her when he didn\'t even fancy her not until he saw her getting banged by Barton?O_o That is not love. Ths lus lust and desire for something you knew you had freely in your palms before it was swiped away from your hands and learning the true value of it. In this case it\'s not that Herro realized he loves her but more of him realizing that she is desirable and worthy of his lust. Sure, Trowa\'s a bad ass manipulator but we knew that from the beginning and he\'s been consistent all throughout. Yes, he\'s the villain of this story but a good villain at that and may I add extremely sexy.^_^ However, Heero didn\'t seem to know what he really wants or his true feelings are and that makes an even more potent villanous character to me. There\'s nothing more dangerous than the perfect soldeir being all undecisive and impulsive at the same time. And it looks like someone just paid for his temper this time around. Sad to say but I feel it\'s Trowa.*sniffs* Oh well, I\'ll have to wait and see for the next chappy to know.^_^ So there\'s hope yet ne?^_~

Anyway, this is an absolutely stunning tension filleapteapter. I love it!^_^ I\'m spellbound and it shows, otherwise I wouldn\'t have ranted this much. You really did a great job!^_____^

Good luck to the last chapter and may it be a happy ending for all three of them.^_~ I know I\'d hate for this fic to end but even good things must come to ase ase at some point. Besides, what are sequels for?^_~

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