rate_review Reviews

good story!

*lily prepares a small altar for Igatona *
I adored your beyblade fics, Dominance is wonderful, the end made to laugh me for a long time! And What Are Teammates he has one of the best scenes lemon that I already read. Thanks for the great fic! You deserve the altar! * Lily lights the incense *\o/\o/\o/\o/

KAI LOVES REI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
.......and max\'s dick is........ small................ ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha aha
Ya I am discusted by your choice of pairing.............. Kai\'s to good for Max................. Kai belongs with me!
~Kitten
ps. i don\'t like you

HOLY SHIT!!! This was really good!!! You so have to continue this or write more about this pairing!!! PLEASE!!! YOU ARE THE BEST!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE WITH SMUT IN IT!!!

Woah....... Luv the pairing! And the fic on the whole!
Y.Talen: *Drools* Wow......
This is his fave pairing!
Y.Talen: HELL YEAH!!!!!!
You\'re amazing at this pairing you should write more! Not that I\'m pressuring you! *Puts away shotgun!*
Y.Talen: PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was a very good story. I like the way you actually made it seem more natural for Max to be shy and a little naive about the act of sex and have Kai be the more knowledgable one since he is older. Not many people understand that balance in Kai/Max or even Kai/Tyson fics. Hell, I sometimes have to make them older to get my point across about it. This was really well written and made me like the interaction and personalities that are missed all too often with this pairing. I applaud you and the fine job you did. Keep up the good work. And it really makes me like the Max and Kai pairings a lot more. Thanks a bunch for telling a great story.