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By: darkcrimson
folder Beyblade › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating: Adult ++
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Chapter 11

Konnichiwa! Welcome to the next chapter! ^^ I hope you guys will like this one, as I said it will be shorter then the last one but then it won’t get a drag effect. And I personally think that’s more crappie than a shorter story, if its written is good *cough* exceptional. I’ve got notice of what happened in my review box and well… yeah… uhm I like to get comments, even with critique. But pleas, try to write something good in it as well then let the bad things rule in it. I know my story isn’t perfect, I don’t expect it to be. But pleas don’t let it sound like am I a total suck up in this… because I like to write and if I get to many responses in that way I WILL stop writing here… I’m not saying you can’t write you own mind out there but… you get the point ^^;;
And when I read a review I will think about what it says, I will try and get it a little to match my own idea’s. and to answer some ones question, I already said I want to make my story a long one. Just look at the story ‘innocent dance’ that’s one of my high favourites ^^
Okay off with the jappin lets start clappin! Uhh the story!

Enjoy!


Chapter 11

Rei was thrown against the wall behind the building, there where he still was forced to stay by a couple of very unwanted people. It was a stupid thing to seek cover behind a building when it is so deserted in that particular area, while knowing you where fallowed by some one who could do anything he had set his mind to. And for the fact another one of that same status had showed up out of no where, defiantly wasn’t helping the matter in this case.
Rei gritted his teeth as he managed to stay onto of his legs and ignored the former impact on his back. He had his fists bolded and his eyes set and a lethal glare as he watched the two man in frond of him, looking the same way at him in person and that really made Rei feel like a trapped cat stuck in a corner.
Luckily for the raven haired teen, he wasn’t all defenceless. Back at his village the elders wanted every child to learn martial arts as a resort to comply for there safety. For when one more experienced was not around and you stood alone, you could still fight back. And that is what Rei is going to do, fight back.
Garland and Brooklyn stood before him like a brick wall, there was no way out only through it. He knew they both where pretty strong, but he just had to take that chance.

“Whats wrong kitty cat?” Brooklyn question with a vile smirk. Rei swallowed at the tone the orange haired male said it and moved slightly, his arms up in a fighting position. He also knew they where a full year older then him. And seeing Garlands’ body structure that had given him even more advantage. But Rei was faster, he had agility and had good balance with his body.

“I don’t know what you want from me, but you better stay back!” Rei hissed as he moved looks between the two man. Garland laughed at the mild threat as his laughter wasn’t heard far over the loud music. He stopped laughing as a smirk set place.

“or what?” he said evilly as he eyed the, To him, defenceless boy in frond of him. Brooklyn placed next to him had set his hands on his hips as he slightly chook his head and eyed the raven haired boy, closely watching his every move.

“I’ll beat the two of you all the way back to the crap house you came from, crying for you’re mommy’s.” The neko answered slowly so they could progress every, single, word into there thick skulls. That didn’t really tick them off, but they didn’t really appreciate it to get that kind of mouth thrown at them. And certainly not from Rei Kon. Garland growled inside himself as he also gripped his fists.

“I think we have to teach you a little lesson about who to respect as your superiors.” Brooklyn said with a smirk only fit for him. Rei wanted to answer that but quickly stepped back when the two charged for him with fists flying for him.

Rei’s eyed widened as he moved his body right, missing the one but receiving Gerland’s fist in his ribs. He fell to the ground as he groaned slightly and felt his side. Rei coughed as he looked up again, but he had to role over the ground the avoid getting kicked. Only to jump back on his feet to let Brooklyn miss a foot he rammed onto the ground. but just as Rei stood he had to bent forward as Garland swooped his fist pas his head.

‘FUCK! THIS IS CRAZY!’ the black haired neko thought as he jumped and let Garland miss his low kick fallowed as Rei bent back (A/N: Matrix stylo! xD) and Brooklyn’s high kick missed him again. Rei moved his body fiercely and fast trying to avoid every kick and fist thrown at him, but he was outnumbered and they where way to fast. The moves they used where martial arts and well aimed. Hard for him to avoid it, and his energy level was lowering. He was getting tired. Rei gritted his teeth as he felt his body slowly giving in.

‘No!’ he thought a little franticly, knowing what would happen if he gave in. He let his body slip for one second, a bad call. He felt a leg ram against his right arm as it was a kick with force and send him flying. Rei was stopped by the wall blocking his way. He slide down and groaned with pain, his shoulder was dislocated. He held it with his other arm. He breathed heavily as he stood back onto his feet and moved away from the wall slightly. Only receiving one, hard, lethal fist in the stomach given by Brooklyn. Rei felt his lungs contract as the ability to breath left him, his legs turned numb as he fell to his knees. His eyes where wide and his skin was pale. He made faint sounds as he slowly gripped his stomach and fell down in a small ball on the ground. That wasn’t enough for the two band members as they each took a place around Rei and started to kick him, hard and every time there feet struck him it seemed to hurt more.

Rei let out soft sounds of suffering and pain each time they hit. He held onto his stomach and shoulder as tightly as he could, trying to be as small as he possible.
“p-pleas s-stop.” He said softly as he made a painful sound again.

“what was that Kitty cat? Stop? Why won’t you BEG for mercy if it hurts so much!?” Garland said laughing as he put extra power in his fallowing kick. Rei groaned loudly because of it. But, he would not beg. No, not for them. NEVER!

“NO!” he shouted as he gripped both feet and pulled both towards each other, they crossed paths as Garland and Brooklyn didn’t expect this move and where pulled off balance. Rei pulled harder and made the two man collide against each other with a smack as they fell down in a hurtful tumble. The black haired neko took this opportunity to get away now he got the chance, putting his hands onto the ground and lifting himself immediately feeling the burning pain of his fresh bruised muscles and bones race through his tired body.

“ungh!” he let out muffled and twisted at the same time. His body felt frozen of pain. He looked up with jaws glued together as his fingers dug in the earth beneath him.

“I have to get away from here..” he uttered as his ribs hurt when he said it. He tried to get up, to get away. He got his knees beneath him as he pushed his upper body on top of it and there gave his balance, he breathed relieved as he got a good breath of air inside of him. He forced his hurting body to a stand as he stood on top of his heavy legs.

‘c’mon I have to move!’ he thought taking his first step to safety. Behind him Garland and Brooklyn got there senses back online and started to rub there heads from the impact, they looked around a little dazed as it all came back to them and shot there blazing eyes at the neko-jin.

Garland growled with anger as he gripped his fists and jumped back onto his feet with an athletic jump. “your going down kitty cat!” Garland yelled as Brooklyn had returned to his standing posture and had already jumped for Rei. The orange haired male had grabbed a hold of Rei’s shirt at the back and gave it a good pull, Rei could not stand his ground at the moment and got thrown back against the wall.

“you’ll pay for that!” Brooklyn snarled as he grabbed the shirt around rei’s neck and pulled again, jerking the neko towards his fist as he was jammed back against the wall. Rei groaned as his head dropped down, he closed his eyes as he felt the pain. Garland had moved to the wall as well and stood very close in frond of the raven hair as Brooklyn held his arms up against the wall. The two men smirked evilly as they noticed how defenceless the smaller kitten looked when he was in that position. But who wouldn’t be after being slammed around in every possible direction, and still being with it.

Garland grabbed a hold of Rei’s chin and cupped it up so he could see his face, it was dirty of the many times his face hit the filthy ground and a little bloody of some punches received. Rei slowly opened his eyes revealing his big golden catlike orbs set in a stare glaring as hard as they could, even he was hurting like hell and could expect more with that look. But he didn’t care.
Brooklyn had slight admiration for his resistance at this point and raised an eyebrow. He moved his face closer to Rei’s to look into his eyes. Rei gave a slight sound and moved his face away from the orange haired male, pulling himself from Garland’s grasp on his cheek. Brooklyn narrowed his eyes at it as they both smirked. Rei swallowed the hurting lump in his throat that didn’t seem to lower, could they’ve noticed? Rei had hold himself though for as long it lasted but any closer was a little to close for his little, till now greenish sanctuary.

Garland retook the hold around Rei’s wrists as he moved them up again, blocking him up against the wall like before. Rei tried to struggle but it just was no use. Brooklyn pressed his body against Rei’s, but more on the side as he gave garland a vile smirk, which the silver haired male returned.

Rei winched when he felt Brooklyn’s hands all over him, stroking his body over the thin amount of clothes he had on and a rush of unwanted stimulations suddenly entered his body with every caress. “Ughh… get your hands off of me!” Rei added when a sound was forced out from within his throat. A sound with something new t it and never something else came close to that. Brooklyn however knew what he was doing and knew the sound of delight very well, even though it was in a unwanted state the sound always sounded the same. The human body is such a betrayal. Rei was getting a harder time every second this torture lasted.
‘why are they doing this?! Let me go! Let-me-go!’ Rei thought angered and slightly frightened at the same time. Now also Garland started to move his own body pas Rei’s as he still held on onto the neko-jin’s arms. Rei had a faint pink blush over the bridge of his nose as he let out sound of protest.
“l-let me g-go! F-fags!” Both man smirked as they tightened there grip around him. “Don’t squeak so much little bitch.” Garland said with a grin as Rei couldn’t say anything back.
“Yeah, I’ve noticed you’re always alone on this school. Except for that little red-haired hobbit and horse lover but that doesn’t count.” Brooklyn began, and when he said it he ripped off the frond of Rei’s shirt finally reaching bare flesh. “and you’re so fun to play with I would say, so innocent and harmless. Its funny how you try to act tough, when everyone knows you’re just a child with a temper and is just a stranded kitty lost from its mother…” Rei was boiling with fury, all those things said about him and he felt to paralyzed to do something about it. He needed some one to come by, to let them stop! He didn’t want this! Rei tried to struggle but already found his power to do so lost minutes ago after this started. Brooklyn’s face had come way closer to his staring into his eyes as every word reached his ears faster. “and you know what, if you think this is bad… you’re in for a real surprise. Cause we… haven’t… even… started.” Rei felt all the air in his lungs leave him, he couldn’t breath, his eyes where set in a terrified stare as Brooklyn’s lips where about to set place on his and take his greenity away from him. Something that was meant for the person he would give his heart and soul to and no one else! His heart was screaming, his mind was blacking out and his body was giving in to his senses…













A/N should I stop?? Or shouldn’t i? muhahaha I got you’re fate in my hands! XD will Brooklyn steal Rei’s greenity and his fate be sealed? Or will he be saved and throw his life upside down anyway?! XD Okay, I’m nice 0:) I’ll go on because I made you guys wait so long XD


“Pardon me for interrupting.” A husky voice suddenly said, breaking the orange hair off, just-on-the-last-second. They both stopping with what they where doing and turned there heads around to see. Rei was still in a paralyzed shock but when he rest his eyes further on the person who just spoke he though his world had come to an end. There next to a yet black motorcycle stood Kai Hiwatari, fully dressed in a black leather suit showing off his well trained body holding a helmet under his right arm as he leaned casually against his bike. His eyes where first set on Garland.
“this was you’re idea wasn’t it?” Kai said in a low voice not really letting through a sound of emotion how he currently felt about this. Garland looked kind of cranky and stared back at Kai. “It wasn’t really an idea.” He said simply. The dual hair moved away from the bike and walked towards the couple placed against the wall. As he did so his eyes trailed over to Brooklyn not even showing he noticed Rei.
“And you?” He said simply looking at the orange hair. He in return raised his shoulders and gave a none caring smirk.
“I felt like it, and he needed to know the truth.” He said simply as they both finally let go of the necko-jin. The boy with the long locks of raven black hair fell to the ground through the wall and just sat there, lifelessly.
Behind the dual hair stood the red head with an icy glare set on his face as he gave the smaller boy onto the ground a filthy look, one which Rei did not notice. “I suggest you guys go back to that fiesta. I think they might be looking for you.” Kai said glancing between the man as they both raised an eyebrow.
(A/N does anyone feel the tension here? XD)
They clearly did not really understand, but for as far they where still sober they decided to not get into debate and just pick on some one else. Seeing Rei was no longer able to put up a fight.
“Fine.” Brooklyn said mockingly as he wiped his hands clean, or acted like he did, and began to walk away around the corner with his hands in his pockets. Only to let his head pop up again for a “coming love?” Which Garland could not resist for, he gave Rei one last look as he fallowed his lover and disappeared just as fast as they once where there.

Rei felt so dirty, so beat up. He wanted to go to sleep. Just sleep, and the night had begun so good. Rei’s mind started to get back into focus again as he knew he still was not alone.
“I’ll go and put away my bike, you’ll coming soon?” the redhead questioned knowing Kai wasn’t about to leave just yet. Maybe that surprised the dual hair cause he turned his head to give him a look. they both glanced at each other for a few moments until Tala looked away smirking and began to walk with his bike towards the garage. When he disappeared into the darkness it was silent again. Rei wanted to know what was going on, but his head was hanging down and wasn’t feeling like cooperating with him.
When he was slightly able to do so he could only see a pair of legs hidden in black leather, walking towards him. When they stopped in frond of him he was a little to dozed to like, back away or something, cause they bent through the knees and now he could face those crimson eyes at own level. They where set in a dark glare as the young neko felt something calm in them. Rei’s own eyes where half open and the little amount of eye colour was shining through bright gold just like real cat eyes, tiredness was reassembled. The dual hair took Rei’s chin into his hand and cupped it up, making Rei look at him entirely.
Nothing happened, they stayed in that position and said nothing. Millions of thoughts rushing through there minds, or plainly nothing… Finally Kai shut his eyes to rest.
“You better keep you mouth shut about this.” He finally said sternly but also a little threatening. Rei felt to, beat up, to protest, so he simply let his eyes look away for the time being. Kai, who still held Rei’s chin in his hand, fell into silence. The sound of music booming on the background was the only thing reminding them they where still in a occupied place.


“Can you walk?” The dual hair suddenly asked. Rei didn’t react at first, did he just hear correct? He slightly looked at him from the corner of his eyes.
“w-what?” he stuttered.
“Probably you’re already deaf. I said if you can walk moron.” He said in the same tone. Rei tried to move and felt his aching muscles.
“of course I can.” He said stubbornly as he gave Kai a look matching his attitude. Kai found it ungrateful and let go of Rei’s face.
“whatever, then find your own way back to your dorm.” The dual haired male stood up straight and started to walk away in a easy pace. Rei narrowed his eyes at it and looked back at the wall, he slowly moved his hand up feeling his bruised arm muscles and others, all pretty sore from all the kicking, hitting and beating he received. He gave a small yelp and quickly checked if the male still heard it, hoping he didn’t. when he saw no difference he tried to pull himself up, succeeding in it to. When he finally stood on his painful legs he started to take a few steps around the corner, far he did not get before he knew he could not take another step. Behind him he heard the dual hair start his motorcycle and that slightly discouraged Rei.
‘shit… now I have to walk all the way back… crap.’ Rei sighed and hated to do this… he just didn’t want to WALK all the way back and STILL not be there in the morning! So he took a breath and while turning around saying.
“Wait! I- holycrap!” That scared the bejezus out of him! as Rei was faced two inches away from his face with a black helmet and a yet black motorcycle before his legs. Rei fell backwards on his but and yelped again.
“I thought I heard that sound correctly. Last chance butbrains.” Kai said a little muffled up from his helmet. Rei gave him a glare and muttered something under his breath as he struggled to stand up a second time again. When he stood he gave a look that all said, ‘questionmark’
“don’t just stand there! I have better things to do then wait for your disobedient brain to listen to your incompetent mind. And if that’s the thing happening in there I rather be on my way again.” Rei puffed up his cheeks and felt his skin there run red, he quickly moved behind the dual hair and slowly sat down behind him. Almost as he wanted to touch as les as he could of the man in frond of him.
“which building?” he said simply, a little annoyance.
“E.” Rei responded softly. Kai gave the paddle a good roar and the weal’s started to spin rapidly, almost out of no where. The raven hair’s eyes widened as he quickly held onto Kai as they speeded off on the road towards his building.

As the wind rushed through Rei’s hair and speed increased he started to wander why Kai was driving him to his new home. He was part of the group who did this to him, maybe even the leader for all he knew.. The dual hair was cold, always mean and didn’t care about a single thing except the band and himself.
Rei looked up to only see the black helmed hiding Kai’s head, his face, his emotion. Rei was confused at the moment. Maybe he just did it because he wanted to let him be in dept, so he would not talk about what happened tonight…
The thought soon faded away, without he knew it he rested his head against the backside of Kai’s back. The outside leather suit was cold, but when he held his head on that place for a while it soon felt warmer… without he knew it he slowly started to drift of as his arms where placed around Kai’s waist as a lock so he wouldn’t fall off. Kai speeded on knowing very well what was going on back there………………………



/TBC/

“anddddd…CUT!” it’s a rap! =D what did ya all think? Was it something? Was it bad? Good? I donno XD I UPDATED! Be glad I did so =P you guys must NOT see my schedule right now. If you want to… mail me XD I was thinking to like make a drawing again with next chapter… I’ve improved a little… ‘Till next time XD

P.S sorry for the lack of hot stuff yaoi people! But Rei just can’t be the first real lemon in here XD even how much I appreciate it! *drool drool* so if anyone suggest a couple?
Greetings,
Darkcrimson

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