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Green Eyed Monster

By: akuseru
folder Fullmetal Alchemist › General
Rating: Adult ++
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harsh realities

title: Green Eyed Monster (part 2)
author: shinotenshi (HaganenoChibi)
warnings: language; shounen-ai?; SUPER LEMON ^_^ v
pairing: you should already know. if not, read the prologue!
disclaimer: fullmetal alchemist does not belong to me; it belongs to hiromu arakawa, square enix, and recently [insert vomiting urge here] funimation.

(ed is 16) ---->ed's POV!

i remembered myself just then about to penetrate winry...was i really prepared for this? this would be my virginity as well as hers; but there's something eating away at the back of my mind...a tiny voice telling me this isn't right, this isn't what i think it is. it's telling me something's amiss, but i'm too hard and turned on to give it a second thought. i slowly begin my intrusion into the hot wet depths of a woman's body - winry's body. she moans in pleasure and ers ers as mrd crd cock slowly sinks into her. i hesitate feeling a bit of resistance but a small push and it's gone. i suppose this is it; we're no longer innocent.

well, innocence is something i lost long ago due to the transmutaion accident...

"ed!~" winry hisses as we n ton to move in rhythm i grit my teeth and steady myself as the sweet friction of our bodies grows. in and out, faster and harder we move together in an expression of ultimate love and physicality. i can feel a familiar pressure building in my abdomen as we continue our movements. gasping heavily, i rely on my automail limbs to hold me up. it keeps getting more and more difficult to stay above her and not crush her with my weight, but somehow i manage.

the voice in my head continues to call to me in vain as i can no longer stop pushing myself into her warmth, i can feel her tighness surround me and i could care less what my common sense is telling me.

"winry...i. beg begin to gasp out, "...you're so....wet.....and tight...." i half whisper. she smiles again in that strange way...has she ever smiled like that before? it's not like her to look so....evil...
"hagane...ed..you're so....hard...." she returns, but i could have sworn i heard her say 'hagane'...why would she? my thoughts of confusion instantly vanish as she forces me on bottom and takes control. she grabs my shoulders and begins to grind up and down causing a feeling so intense i can't keep my screams of passion inside anymore.

"ahhhn...WINRY...OH...more...please...MORE!!" i writhe in her control. she puts her muscular legs to work and i somehow find time to admire her body...

then something catches my eye; what's that red mark on her thigh? she slams onto me again and the feelings caused push any coherent thoughts far far away. reality comes crashing down on me as i feel the pressure burst in an intense feeling, something moreso than what i ever did to myself. i cum into her with a force even i can feel as her muscles grip my shaft and she orgasms as well.

hot, sw, an, and tired, all i can do is collapse next to her after withdrawing myself from her warm folds. i stare at the ceiling and close my eyes. the voice has returned, urging me to leave or something but i am too tired to listen. i roll over onto my side and lazily open my eyes. the sight that greets me is comforting until i once again see that red marking out of the corner of my eye. my focus is blurry from my exhaustion but i sit up slowly, still catching my breath.

as thing become clearer i glance at winry's thigh and my breath gets caught in my throat. my chest is constricted as though a snake is wrapped about my heart, and to be honest, it's the snake of lies...and betrayal. slowly i get up from my resting place and walk away from the bed.

"ed...what are you doing...?" it whispers; i turn and stare at it as 'she' becomes 'him'....her blond locks become those long horrendous green dreadlocks and she morphs into that homonculus...

"envy...!" i hiss "why?!" tears seep from my eyes in hot anger. he has stolen something...something more than wrath...something i can never get back, not even with the philosopher's stone. that monster has stolen my virginity. he looks at me with that same evil smile that made the voice in my head scream 'i told you so!' asi realized i did know where i had seen it before.

"why? oh it's simple..." he says in his usual cocky tone. "because i wanted you. i've always wanted to fuck you...my rival for favoritism, my enemy." he says, a look of sadness flittering across his face for but an instant. i look at him and i know the confusion is written plain as day on my own face. one thing stuck in my mind...'rival for favoritism'....
"what do you mean rival?" i ask, cocking my head to one side. he grins, and moves toward the window. as he opens the window to escape, he blows me a kiss and whispers, "you'll find out on your own." then, just like that, he's gone leaving me standing there half naked and broken.

the silence crashes down around me and i collapse into a sobbing heap. the only thing i could try to save...gone...my first time stolen from me by that thing...a wail of despair escapes my lips as i cry. i can hear al's hollow footsteps rushing up the stairs and i crouch in fetal position on the floor. i hear al drawing an alchemy array and opening the lock; i hear him stumble in and he gasps in shock at my state of undress. we are engulfed by the silence as his soft gasp escapes his invisible lips.

"niisan...!"
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author's note: OH THE ANGST! XD the next part will be going on in this story line and most likely be in either ed or al's POV. i'll be trying to finish it soon, this is oneof my most interesting ideas IMO since i've gotten back into fic writing. ^_^
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