Reunited Lovers Past
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Gundam Wing/AC › Yaoi - Male/Male
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Adult ++
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Category:
Gundam Wing/AC › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
4
Views:
2,142
Reviews:
0
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
I do not own Gundam Wing/AC, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
A Not-so-Brief Explaination (NOT PART OF THE STORY!)
I recently had a reader who posted a somewhat understandable review (which I deleted before thinking about it, and for that I'm now sorry) about my story having a lot of problems with it. My question is, doesn't everyone's stories have at least a few problems! That is one of the reasons I post my work on these sites as it is, to try to get better. So here, I make several points:
1) I just want to let everyone know that, while I DID come up with the idea for this story, this is not the original edition of my story. I'm in the Navy and had to leave my original work at home when I left and have not yet been able to retrieve a copy of it from my belongings at home. So, over the course of a great while, this story has taken a number of different turns. As with many people, I tend to move my stories along quickly, because if I don't things tend to become repetative and boring.
2) An argument was brought up about some things being unrealistic, such as Quatre supposedly getting over his son's death immediately, his knife wound being cared for by a friend rather than a doctor, and the shooting cases. Here's my defense for that: A) While Gundam Wing is a more serious-type of anime, let me remind you people that most things in anime are not realistic! If you'll pardon the cliche, it's a bloody animated tv show! B) I can think of at least a few cases where the character in question (i.e.: Heero!)should've died with no "medical professionals" around to help him or her, but through someone who is simply doing the best that they can is able to save that person.
3) The final line in the review was something along the lines of "I hope you take this to heart." What the heck was that? Some final bit of scathing remark to make me feel stupid or put down? While I appreciate any and all constructive criticism, I have let too many things pull me down in the past to let little remarks like that do anything more than slightly piss me off because comments like that are not constructive.
At the current time, I am in the middle of a writers block with this story, but I will continue it as soon as I can. Thank you for taking the time to critique me, but people, PLEASE don't be immature! If anyone has any suggestions for what I could do for the next section of this story, with Heero and Quatre trying to deal with the deaths of their friends, and what they'll do to kiss the bad guys' asses, I'd love to get the feedback. Just post it as a review, and I'll take what I get. Thanks!
1) I just want to let everyone know that, while I DID come up with the idea for this story, this is not the original edition of my story. I'm in the Navy and had to leave my original work at home when I left and have not yet been able to retrieve a copy of it from my belongings at home. So, over the course of a great while, this story has taken a number of different turns. As with many people, I tend to move my stories along quickly, because if I don't things tend to become repetative and boring.
2) An argument was brought up about some things being unrealistic, such as Quatre supposedly getting over his son's death immediately, his knife wound being cared for by a friend rather than a doctor, and the shooting cases. Here's my defense for that: A) While Gundam Wing is a more serious-type of anime, let me remind you people that most things in anime are not realistic! If you'll pardon the cliche, it's a bloody animated tv show! B) I can think of at least a few cases where the character in question (i.e.: Heero!)should've died with no "medical professionals" around to help him or her, but through someone who is simply doing the best that they can is able to save that person.
3) The final line in the review was something along the lines of "I hope you take this to heart." What the heck was that? Some final bit of scathing remark to make me feel stupid or put down? While I appreciate any and all constructive criticism, I have let too many things pull me down in the past to let little remarks like that do anything more than slightly piss me off because comments like that are not constructive.
At the current time, I am in the middle of a writers block with this story, but I will continue it as soon as I can. Thank you for taking the time to critique me, but people, PLEASE don't be immature! If anyone has any suggestions for what I could do for the next section of this story, with Heero and Quatre trying to deal with the deaths of their friends, and what they'll do to kiss the bad guys' asses, I'd love to get the feedback. Just post it as a review, and I'll take what I get. Thanks!