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Was this like...a Mary-Jane parody? If so it was a great one! Shumei had all the standard Mary-Jane qualities: an eternally beautiful (despite two children), rich, self-sacrificing, genius (according to the intro of your second Vignette), rape victim with one of the pilots hopelessly in love with her. Hilarious! Though I\'m not quite sure why the pilots were so overwhelmingly out of character...were you doing an OOC parody too? Beause I don\'t think I\'ve seen them the way you described them anywhere before...Anyway, great for a laugh! You use fairly sophisticated English, but if this wasn\'t a parody your story-telling, originality, and character portrayal leave much to be desired.

-Toki

heh...are you, like, serious? *struggles to be unbiased* well...the constant notes decreased the readability of this fic. it made it confusing and ruined the flow. major ooc-ness from the three pilots not living in your happy home, but you did that on purpose maybe? you bashed my favourite character and i despise self-inserts but it did make me laugh. a word of advice if i may? don't call your husband/boyfriend impotent. trust me, they HATE that.

Haha, you know, as funny as this may seem...I actually liked this story! It was very humorous, and the lemon was well done...for your first? Anywho, I\'m off to read your second \"Vignette,\" and I truly hope it will be as rewarding as this one. And congrationsions! For a story so \"bad\" by others\' standards, you received 6 reviews (counting mine) although it is quite clear others didn\'t like this. Don\'t pity the fool who pitys the fool, as they say. Hm..I wonder how many people will actually understand that statement? Ah well, ask a question and fear an idiot\'s answer, eh? Not you, of course. See you \'round!

--Sammy the Intelligent

well,that wuz FUCKIN BAD!!u make fucking dumb stories and u r very stupid 2 be writing these \"vignettes\" cuz they r stupid and bitchy.andy if u think ur gonna get reviews,ur half rite but the only reviews ur eva gonna get r bad ones

well,that wuz FUCKIN BAD!!u make fucking dumb stories and u r very stupid 2 be writing these \"vignettes\" cuz they r stupid and bitchy.and if u think ur gonna get reviews,ur half rite but the only reviews ur eva gonna get r bad ones

My god, this is the worst thing EVER. You need to see a mental doctor worse then I do.

...Bitch.

.....Wow. Appare you you don\'t like sodomites but you don\'t seem to mind being a polygamist. Gee, that makes sense.. Please never update this again. It makes Gary Coleman cry.

Please for the love of God tell this is supposed to be a parody, that you don\'t actually believe this! Please!



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